Sunday, April 4, 2010

Comment4Kids Week 13

I read Dillon's post about his experiences at camp. He described them in the form of a poem and even shared video footage with us. My comment:
I am a student at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, AL. Was this footage from your trip at camp? If this is you, it looks like you had a blast! I love your poem and your usage of adjectives and adverbs. You seem to have a natural talent for writing, so I hope you continue to write! Thank you for sharing this video and poem.

1 comment:

  1. I really like with what we are doing with the comment for kids. I think its a great tool to see what the kids are actually doing in their classes. My students will have great opportunities also.